At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

As life has

becomed

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become

more convenient and comfortable, families have seemed to have more than two children.

Therefore

the number of young adults in some nations has surpassed the older

generation

. Personally, I consider

this

phenomenon as a more positive than worrying one. The development of

young

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generation

both in quantity and quality often powers a country.

This

is possibly because of the nature of youngsters

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being energetic physically and open mentally

as well as

spiritually. Thanks for being the most healthy subject, challenging missions

such

as

volunterring

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volunteering

in wars or community services are

ofen

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often

welcomed by the youth. Without a great number of males, the defence system of a country is likely to be considered weak leading to an

esily vulnarable

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easily vulnerable

nation.

Moreover

, young adults seem to be more open to new ideas,

especialy

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especially

in terms of information technology- one of the factors contributing to a more convenient life. Their support

to

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current inventions

usuallly

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usually

results in more advancements to be made.

For example

,

while

some senior citizens might feel reluctant to

expose

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to smartphones for

the

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complicated usage, youngsters prefer

this

technology to the past cellphones and readily pay more to own one which leads to cutting-edge

smartphone

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annually. Though being the underlying power of a country, the growing number of young

generation

compared to the elderly might be disadvantageous for some reasons. The most remarkable problem stemming from

this

unbalanced proportion of

population

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is the

higer

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higher

rate of unemployment.

This

is particularly true in some developed countries where technology might have created robots to replace some common jobs

such

as waiters, manufacturing workers or hotel receptionists. Jobless youngsters often lose themselves and take up bad habits or even criminal acts.

This

clearly threatens social security. Despite the risk of more unemployed people which could be solved by the effort of the young themselves by studying harder to take

more

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challenging tasks, the advantages of the young

generation

seem to outweigh the disadvantages.