The table shows the obesity rate in one country over a period of time.
The line graph provides information on the proportion of obesity from 1971 to 2005, in one country.
Overall
, there was an upward trend of obesity rate for every age
group
over the timeframe.
The age
group
of 30-40 remained fairly stable, until rised
dramatically to slightly over 20.0 Correct your spelling
risen
raised
percent
in 1999 and remained rising slowly to reach approximately 25 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. The groups of 45 - 64 and 65 - 74, both remain the same from 1971 to 1976, hovering at around less than 20%. In 1999 both Change the spelling
per cent
age
groups
Change noun form
groups'
group's
ratio
increased sharply to 35 Fix the agreement mistake
ratios
percent
. The Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
above 64 showed a gradual dicline
in 2003 before it Correct your spelling
decline
leap
once again to 35% in 2005. Wrong verb form
leapt
In
the other hand, the Change preposition
On
age
group
between 45 to 64 continued to grow to 40% in 2005.
However
, the younger age
group
started with lower
fatness rate at less than 10% in 1971. In 1999 it Correct article usage
a lower
experinced
a significant growth to around 20%. It continued to rise modestly to reach 25% in 2005.Correct your spelling
experienced
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