The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
The table illustrates information about primary school tutors'
income
in US Dollars in five countries in 2009. It is important to note that teachers who worked in Denmark had better salaries in minimum years
than others.
Luxembourg teachers who had started their career with 80000 $ received 112000$ per year and then
after 30 years
they paid 139000 which is the highest income
in all countries. In comparison, Koreans who had the longest period to reach a high level received 840000$ in maximum while
Japan with 34 years
had 62400$ in income
. Moreover
, Japanese folks were just under Korean at the beginning of their path with 28000$.
Denmark which was higher than Korea and Japan with 47000$ had 54000$ maximum salary which was equal to its yearly income
after 8 years
. On the other hand
, Australia had the same situation as Denmark in terms of yearly payment and its maximum which was 48000$ after 9 years
. Also
, they had 34600$ salary at the beginning of their job.Submitted by mirhashemim7 on
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