The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of illiterate people
by
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6 regions and by each gender
according to
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data
of
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last
year.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportion of illiteracy of
women
is higher
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every given region and over half of
this
gender are not educated in Arab states and South Asia. To start with developed countries, the proportion is nearly 0 for both genders, with just
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slight
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higher index for females. 10% of males and about 12% of females are not educated in Latin American countries and
Caribbean
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,
while
under 10% of men and 20% of
women
are
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struggle
also
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with
this
problem in East Asia and Oceania. Sub-Saharan African men's illiteracy
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just above 30%,
while
women
's index stands close to 50%. 30% of men and over 50% of
women
are illiterate in
Arab
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the Arab
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States,
while
South Asia has
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proportion of illiteracy - about 35% and 55% for males and females respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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