The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of illiterate people
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it is clear that
the proportion of illiteracy of Linking Words
women
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every given region and over half of Change preposition
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gender are not educated in Arab states and South Asia.
To start with developed countries, the proportion is nearly 0 for both genders, with just Linking Words
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a slight
slight
higher index for females. 10% of males and about 12% of females are not educated in Latin American countries and Change the word
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Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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problem in East Asia and Oceania. Sub-Saharan African men's illiteracy Linking Words
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women
's index stands close to 50%. 30% of men and over 50% of Use synonyms
women
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Arab
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the Arab
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South Asia has Linking Words
bigger
proportion of illiteracy - about 35% and 55% for males and females respectively.Add an article
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