The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000
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The given map depicts the transformations made in the town of Willington in the years
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1780, 1860 and 2000. Generally speaking, the area located to the east of the main
highway
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witnessed dramatic changes. Over the years, vegetation was chopped down in order to build more
villages
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and a bridge was constructed over the
highway
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.
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, farms in the
center
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of the map were removed to construct several amenities
such
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as schools,
sport
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fields and roads. If we compare the
year
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1780 and 1860, we can see that farms were reduced by
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half. In 1780 there were 100 homes, but by 1860 several trees were cleared to the east of the town so as to make way for more
villages
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, doubling the number of houses to 200.
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, a road which connects the
highway
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and the
villages
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was built to the north of Willington. By 2000, the
villages
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increased even more, reaching 500 houses. Both farms and trees to the east of the town were completely cleared and replaced with two schools and two
sport
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fields in the southeast. An additional road which connects the
villages
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to the schools and
sport
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fields was constructed.
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, a wetland for birds was added
at the end
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of the
highway
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,
as well as
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several shops on the edge of it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Vocabulary: Replace the words highway, villages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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