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The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion
in
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number
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numbers
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 of Asian elephants from nine countries in Asia.
This
 survey was conducted between 1997 to 2004.
Overall
, the highest figure
of
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for
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 Asian
elephant
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elephants
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 showed India
while
 the
last
 showed
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China.
To begin
 with, India had a substantial proportion of 10,000
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 1997, 2004
was decreasing
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 2,500
population
. Following was seen Myanmar 5,000 at 1997 and went down around 500 at 2004. Interestingly, Thailand depicted
apporximately
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approximately
 4,000
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 1997
while
at
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 2004, it was a
deifferent
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different
 around 1,500
population
. And
also
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 Malaysia, it was a big decreasing number of
population
. Moving to an
eqaul
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equal
firgure
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figure
 of
an Asian elephants
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Asian elephants
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demonstated
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demonstrated
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 Vietnam, Sri Lanka, and Cambodia respectively, There were in the same ways in the maximum between 1997 to 2004. Turning to China illustrated the lowest
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 1997 about 500
population
 and increased
around
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 500
at
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 2004.
Propbably
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Probably
, the government
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 to look after
a
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wildlife more.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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