You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. Now write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - say how you felt about the visit - refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her - invite your friend to visit you

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Dear Lovjeet, I hope you are doing great. After several years, meeting you again at a wedding party was quite an exciting moment for me.

This

visit reminded me of the old days of college when we had a lot of parties together in the hostel. I am writing

this

letter to thank you for inviting me to your brother’s marriage. I really appreciated the way you treated me during my stay at your place. It was the same as you always host the parties during the college time.

Although

I tried South Indian food first time in my life still it was a great experience for me.

However

, the most enjoyable moment was the dance performance on the stage where I

also

gave my performance as well and it was something I had not done in decades. I hope you

also

enjoyed that time. As I already told you, I am going to celebrate my birthday next month at my house. So, I would be very grateful if you could join us for the celebration. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards, Tajinder Singh

Submitted by tajinder.panag on Tue Dec 12 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a separate key point to maintain clarity and organization.

task achievement

To enhance engagement, consider including more personalized details that reference shared memories with your friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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