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The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.

#show #applicants #year #doolittle #university’s #media #campaign #age #range #university
The bar chart provides data related to
number
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a number
the number
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 of
applicants
 in a UK university from 1999 to 2003. The university
applicants
 came from European Nations,
Middle
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the Middle
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 East,
Far
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the Far
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 East, and Africa.
Overall
,
applicants
 from
Far
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the Far
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 East
shown
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showed
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 an increase
of
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in
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 trends over the period
while
 the
numbers
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number
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 of European Nations
applicant
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applicants
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indicates
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indicated
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 a decline.
According to
 the data, in 1999, the proportion of
applicants
 from European countries reached a peak at 35.000.
However
, the number constantly declined and reached
the
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its
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 lowest point by 2003 at around 10.000.
In contrast
, the
applicants
 that
comes
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 from
Far
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the Far
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 East displayed a rise from 15.000 in 1999 to 30.000 in 2003, which doubled the
initials
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initial
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 numbers. Africa
have
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had
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 a period of stability between 1999 and 2001 at roughly 2.500 candidates, it was the lowest
rates
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rate
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 compared to
three
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the three
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 other regions. The
last
 area to be mentioned is
Middle
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the Middle
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east
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East
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 which had
a
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apply
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fluctuative
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fluctuating
 trends over the period, in 2001 15.000
applicants
comes
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came
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 from
this
 area
then
 the number
had
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apply
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a
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apply
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decline
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declined
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 by 2.500 of margin in 2002. The proportion
then
 rose again and reached 20.000
as it is
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at its
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 highest point.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words applicants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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