The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.
The bar chart provides data related to
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
applicants
in a UK university from 1999 to 2003. The university Use synonyms
applicants
came from European Nations, Use synonyms
Middle
East, Correct article usage
the Middle
Far
East, and Africa.
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the Far
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, Linking Words
applicants
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the Far
shown
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showed
of
trends over the period Change preposition
in
while
the Linking Words
numbers
of European Nations Fix the agreement mistake
number
applicant
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applicants
indicates
a decline.
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According to
the data, in 1999, the proportion of Linking Words
applicants
from European countries reached a peak at 35.000. Use synonyms
However
, the number constantly declined and reached Linking Words
the
lowest point by 2003 at around 10.000. Change the word
its
In contrast
, the Linking Words
applicants
that Use synonyms
comes
from Change the verb form
come
Far
East displayed a rise from 15.000 in 1999 to 30.000 in 2003, which doubled the Correct article usage
the Far
initials
numbers.
Africa Change the noun form
initial
have
a period of stability between 1999 and 2001 at roughly 2.500 candidates, it was the lowest Wrong verb form
had
rates
compared to Fix the agreement mistake
rate
three
other regions. The Correct article usage
the three
last
area to be mentioned is Linking Words
Middle
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the Middle
east
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a
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applicants
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the number Linking Words
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decline
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declined
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rose again and reached 20.000 Linking Words
as it is
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at its
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