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61.The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The table and pie chart display the total price and the countries from, which it came, of fish imported to the UK in the 10-year period from 1990 to 2000.
Overall
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, the biggest value was in the year of 2000.
Also
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, the sources constantly
were changing
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change
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 in
the
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apply
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percentage through the years.
Firstly
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, the costs increased in
this
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 particular period, from nearly 6,5 billion in 1988 to merely over 8,5 billion in 1992.
Then
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, it
also
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 slightly grew up to almost 11 billion in 2000.
Secondly
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, Canada took roughly 70% out of all sources in 1988,
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then
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, it dramatically decreased to 34% in the next given year.
Finally
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, it ended up with just under 30% in 2000.
In contrast
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, two other categories pushed out Canada and grew up.
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, the starting point of China was just a quarter out of the whole pie chart,
however
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 in the following years it rose to almost 40% in 2000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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