The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The diagrams illustrate the structure of a public
park
as it first opened in 1920 and the now. In general, what stands out from the diagrams is that Grange
Park
has seen dramatic changes over the period
such
as replacing the glasshouse with a new water feature, and the rose
garden
and its
seats
in the middle of the
park
can not be disregarded.
To begin
with, the glasshouse which was in the south-west of the
park
was demolished by constructing a new rose
garden
and its
seats
around.
Moreover
, the north-west of the
park
experienced 2 big changes
while
building a new cafe and children's play area by abolishing the rose
garden
and pond for water plants, respectively.
In addition
, the left side of the fountain was the place of stage for musicians before a new amphitheatre was constructed for concerts. With regards to other re-developments, the south-east of the area used to have
seats
and a rose
garden
;
however
, they were removed, and it is empty right now.
Although
we had a fountain in the centre of the
garden
park
in the past, it was replaced by a new rose
garden
and
seats
.
Furthermore
, the glasshouse and
seats
on the right side gave their places to the water feature and a new entrance for the underground car
park
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, garden, seats with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • developments
  • modifications
  • landscaping
  • recreational needs
  • enhance
  • functionality
  • vegetation
  • environmental conservation
  • infrastructure improvements
  • community involvement
  • diverse groups
  • outdoor activities
  • environmental stewardship
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