The table and charts detailed below give information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in on area of Britain. The table illustrates where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The picture illustrates how much data on
police
cost between 2017 to 2018 in the UK, while
the pie charts represent the income
. The table prove
data about how Verb problem
provides
budget
Correct article usage
the budget
come
;Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
whereas
the pie charts show how the money
was spent. Overall
, it is clear that
the total income
of an average british
family increased between 2017 to 2018, Change the capitalization
British
the
Correct word choice
and the
amounth
of Correct your spelling
amount
police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
on souncers
increased. Correct your spelling
soldiers
Additonally
, Correct your spelling
Additionally
british
Change the capitalization
British
police
spent much more money
on income
decreased by the same token period.
According to
the table, in
2017 to 2018,Change preposition
from
an
sum of Correct article usage
the
police
British spend
Replace the word
spending
money
was increase
Wrong verb form
increased
at
304.7m to 318.6m. The National Change preposition
from
Goverment
of Correct your spelling
government
police
budget
was rise
Change the verb form
rose
at
175.5m to 177.8m, Change preposition
from
similarly
to the local taxes went up to 102. from 91.2m. Likewise
, the other sources of police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
was go
up to 0,5m from 38m.
Regarding the pie charts, the Change the verb form
went
income
of how the cost was spendt
was fallCorrect your spelling
spent
at
75% to 69%during the period. Change preposition
from
However
, the technology of how the money
was spent go
up Wrong verb form
went
at
8% to 14% from 2017 to 2018. Change preposition
by
In addition
, the similarity the number of people who spent money
for
building and Change preposition
on
transport
similar Wrong verb form
transporting
stend
at 17%.Correct your spelling
stand
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, income, budget, money, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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