The table shows results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living on a particular city.Units are measured in percentage

The table below displays the results of 2 different surveys done on six various aspects of living in a city.
Overall
, Education, Healthcare and the Environment have consistently remained good,
whereas
, transport seems to have gotten worse over the years.
However
, every single sector has become increasingly bad over the years. Education, Healthcare and the Environment make up the majority of the good section across both surveys, the figures in 2010 being 82, 74 and 71 respectively. The domain of Employment experienced a rise of 10% in the good section, which, was the largest increase throughout
this
section.
On the other hand
,
this
part
also
had a 13% rise in the bad category, again, becoming the largest difference of any sector. Shops have remained relatively steady over the time course
,
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is
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the only element which stayed the same in the neither good nor bad domain. Transport has remained to be the
lowest rated
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activity in both 1980 and 2010, decreasing to 39 in the good and climbing to 38 in the bad.
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