You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask you about
testing
and repair of a Sony camera,which I bought a week Correct article usage
the testing
before
.I am Karina , a regular customer of your company .I bought a couple of digital items,Rephrase
ago
such
as four smartphones ,a laptop and a digital camera.
The product I sent to your customer service center
for repair Change the spelling
centre
last
Monday was the second one, which I was
bought it one week ago.Unnecessary verb
apply
Unfortunatly
,when I brought it back to my home , I found it doesn't work again.As a regular customer of your company ,I did not distrust Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
about
your itemsChange preposition
apply
,
and did not test Remove the comma
apply
it
at your shop that day.
Correct pronoun usage
them
This
digital camera is prepared for our family trip to Tashkent next month.My father dreams of taking it and record
magnificent Wrong verb form
recording
landscape
and personal memory Fix the agreement mistake
landscapes
picture
.Fix the agreement mistake
pictures
Howevet
,it has already been over a week currently.I would like to get a determined time for my purchase, please.
Please let me know what you plan as soon as possible and do Correct your spelling
However
furthe
discussion.
Best regards,
Karina.Correct your spelling
further
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