You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask you about

testing

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the testing

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and repair of a Sony camera,which I bought a week

before

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ago

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.I am Karina , a regular customer of your company .I bought a couple of digital items,

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as four smartphones ,a laptop and a digital camera. The product I sent to your customer service

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for repair

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Monday was the second one, which I

was

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bought it one week ago.

Unfortunatly

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Unfortunately

,when I brought it back to my home , I found it doesn't work again.As a regular customer of your company ,I did not distrust

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your items

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and did not test

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at your shop that day.

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digital camera is prepared for our family trip to Tashkent next month.My father dreams of taking it and

record

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magnificent

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and personal memory

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Howevet

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However

,it has already been over a week currently.I would like to get a determined time for my purchase, please. Please let me know what you plan as soon as possible and do

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further

discussion. Best regards, Karina.

ina1_95Tue Dec 12 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea and stays focused on that idea without unnecessary digressions.

Coherence and Cohesion

Use a logical structure with appropriate transitions to create a clear sequence of ideas for easier comprehension.

Coherence and Cohesion

Remember to use proper greeting and closing conventions for a formal letter.

Task Achievement

Ensure your response fully satisfies all requirements of the task, with each point described in sufficient detail.

Task Achievement

Maintain a consistently appropriate tone throughout the letter; a mix of personal anecdote and formal complaint language should be managed carefully.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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