The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
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The table above displays information about spending on a range of different items in five countries in 2002.
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, the food industry had the most revenue spent on it, with
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being the country contributing the most. Leisure and education was the sector where the least amount of money went. In general, the country that consumed the least expenditure was Sweden. The food, drinks and tobacco industry makes up the sector for the majority of money being spent.
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and Ireland had the highest figures, 32.14 and 28.91, with
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attributing more than double that of Italy and Sweden. Clothing and Footwear remained relatively the same for all the countries,
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highest monetary amount generated by Italy (9.00). Leisure and Education was the lowest category consistently in all five countries.
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spent four times as much as Spain in
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regard, the figures being respectively 4.35% and 1.98%. Ireland, Italy and Sweden all
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to similar figures of around 3%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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