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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree

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As globalization era technology and fashion trends are connected by social humans. It makes the public concerned about the
clothes
 or the level of society which will make
children
 focus more on fashionable
clothes
 when they go to
school
. Some people think that students should interested in the lesson rather than their appearance by wearing new
clothes
 and wearing
school
uniforms
. In my view, there is a pivot advantage for a child and
parents
 in the same way.
To begin
 with, wearing
school
uniforms
 has a crucial role for
children
 and
parents
. There is a symbol from the
school
 that can separate students from different academies and grades. It can save some money for
parents
 because the
school
 can control the reasonable price of
uniforms
 and is easy to wash and tend.
Moreover
, kids do not have disagreements about
clothes
 or privileges at
school
 and teachers do not have to take care of them unfairly as well.
Hence
 a
school
 uniform should be a good choice for
children
 who do not have to worry and be disturbed by fashion or beauty standards.
On the other hand
,
school
uniforms
 can be overwhelming for
children
such
 as old shirts or old shoes because some families have low finances they can not provide a new one for their kids.
Also
, some
children
 can show power through
jewelry
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 or a gadget that separates a status. Sometimes uniform is prohibitively expensive because the authority want to make more profits from
parents
 and it is a hard situation like a published
school
 in my country. It will make a different status and level. So
then
 if a government does not take action or control that can affect their family and
children
 will not have opportunities to study or go to effective holistic education. In conclusion, wearing a uniform has two sides at the same time but a government or authority should comprehend and encourage their people and support curriculum practical programs in the Ministry of Education. In my view, I agree that we should incite students to wear
uniforms
 that beneficial them and can preserve desirable traditional
clothes
while
 a child should focus more on the lesson in the class.
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