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work after moving on from college

along with

their average

salary

of

graduates

in Australia From 2004 to 2012.

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, the

maths

graduates

had the highest rate of university

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and the average

salary

of

graduates

.

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line

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graph shows that

maths

graduates

had 80 per cent in 2004

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two years later,

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increased slightly by 90%. In 2008, it

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decreased slightly which was around 88%. From 2010 to 2012, there was diminished slightly from 81

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to 80 per cent.

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,

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describes

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that the

maths

graduates

and

the

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all

graduates

had the same amount of

salary

in

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from 2002 to 2004 which was $41000 and $43000 respectively. In 2006

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graduates

had

salary

increment

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by $7000

in contrast

, all

graduates

had

salary

reductions by $3000. Between 2008 and 2012, both

graduates

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and end of the year they got $56000 and $ 51000 respectively.