Technology
has played an important role in
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world. It has played a vital role in all the sectors.
Moreover
, it has
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aChange the article
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important part of
life
.
Firstly
, I would
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say that there are numerous
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advantageFix the agreement mistake
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when integrating
Technology
inChange preposition
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human
life
.
For example
, Social media has played a vital role in bringing
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together. It can be any person staying anywhere in the world,
One
can communicate through social
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.
Moreover
,
ThereFix capitalization
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are many social
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where
one
can create a professional profile and look for a job. Eventually,
one
can
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communicate with
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Therefore
receive a response instantly.
On the other hand
, There are a lot of disadvantages as well.
According to
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research conducted, on
an Correct article usage
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average a human
spendChange the verb form
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his 70 % of leisure time on
socialAdd an article
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platform.
Instead
of following a social
life
with his family.
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, There are more than
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%
of Change preposition
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increase in
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cases in
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due to
gapCorrect article usage
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in relationship between couples.
Moreover
,
one
can notice that in
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world there is a huge building up for physical communication. Which will in
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day
will Remove a modal verb
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impact our neighbourhood
as well as
society.
To conclude
, There are both pros and cons for every individual thing. it is our own decision to choose them wisely. But
as perChange preposition
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my
we should not completely depend on modern
technology
in
life
Therefore
, We should limit the use of
technology
only up to
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level unless and until it doesn't harm our personal
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.