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You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: •explain the situation •tell him/her how you are effected by this •Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

#block #flats #neighbour #noise #landlord #•explain #situation #•tell #•suggest
Dear Pankaj, I am Joseph, tenant of your apartment no: 301 in
palava
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Palava
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. I am writing
this
 letter to explain the problem, which I
am
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have been
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 encountering from the neighbour
since
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for
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last
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the last
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 15 days. He makes a lot of noise throughout the day and night, which adversely
effecting
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affects
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 my office job during
the
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apply
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work from home and
mental
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my mental
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 condition. Even after my request, he is continuing the same activity. So here I am really looking for your intervention to resolve
this
 matter quickly.
Otherwise
, I may need to think about any other convenient option of
stay
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 nearby. It is very hard to explain, how
such
sound
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a sound
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 environment negatively impacted my mental health and productivity. I couldn’t complete the job allotted to me by my company even after the extended time period and
also
 my son is struggling to study for his on-ging
mid term
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 exams.
Besides
 all, it disturbed our sleep, which in turn led me to bad physical and mental health
condition
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. Hope you understand my
situations
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situation
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 well and I am looking forward
for
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to
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 your prompt action on
this
. Yours sincerely, Joseph 301, Palava
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Tone
Ensure that you maintain a formal tone throughout the letter since it is addressed to a landlord, who is your lessor. The use of a casual greeting at the beginning could be replaced with a more formal one.
Task Response
Try to provide concrete examples or evidence for the issues you're facing, such as specific times when the noise occurs and how it disrupts your work and personal life. This could make your complaint more compelling.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain the logical flow by using linking words or phrases to ensure that each point you make builds upon the previous one and leads seamlessly into the next.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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