You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Type a letter to your friend. In your letter, Invite him to stay and suggest a date briefly describe the new house and garden say why you like your new house

Dear Aman, How are you? I hope
you've
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you're
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well! I'd like to invite you
for staying
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to stay
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with me and spend some quality
time
together. We haven't seen each other since I moved to Brantford. I am over the cloud nine to tell you that I bought a new
house
here and would like you to visit my
house
and stay with me on coming weekend if
this
time
suits your schedule. The
house
I bought is on
outskirts
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the outskirts
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of Brantford and has a beautiful trail on the backside of
house
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the house
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to walk.
Moreover
, my home has three bedrooms with
attached
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an attached
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washroom
along with
beautiful
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a beautiful
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living area. You will be astonished to see that I managed the garden really well and
has
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have
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grown vegetables in it. I really love my
house
because it is away from the
crowd
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crowds
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and noise of the city and I can enjoy
the
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nature and spend some
time
in peace. You will be glad to know that
ambience
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of
this
place is just awesome.
Most
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The most
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lovable thing about
this
house
is
massive
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the massive
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living room where all
family
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the family
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can sit together and enjoy during leisure
time
. I can't wait to see you! Your friend, Simran
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear main idea, and use a variety of linking words to connect sentences and ideas more coherently.
Task Achievement
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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