The table and charts below gve information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.

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The table provides

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data about the sources of

budget

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about

budget

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coming from three different means;

whereas

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, the pie charts show how the money was spent.

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it is clear that

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the total income of an average

british

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family increased between 2017 to 2018.

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, British

police

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spent

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much

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money on salaries/wages.

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the table,

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2017 to 2018, the total amount of spending

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police

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British increased from 304.7m to 318.6m. The National

Government of

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police

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budget

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rose between 175.5m and 177.8m,

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similarly

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to the local taxes with 102m in 2017 and 91.2m in 2018.

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, the other sources of

police

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budget

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went up to 38,5m from 38m. Regarding the pie charts, the income of how the cost was spent fell from 75% to 69% during the period.

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,expenditure on

the

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technology went up

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by 14

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% in 2018. The number of people who spent money on building and transport remained stable

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17%.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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The table and charts below gve information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money come from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some are of the opinion that children below the age of 12 shouldn’t be allowed to have a mobile phone. Others believe that mobile phones are a useful tool for children of all ages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

in some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. what problems does this cause and what are some of possible solutions?