The chart below give information about diffrent tyoes of waste dispossed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.
The pie chart illustrates the comparison of various types of
waste
disposed of (paper
, green waste
, metal, glass
, plastic, wood, food
, textiles, and other
) in one nation between 1960 and 2011.
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Overall
, it appears that the majority of garbage
disposed of had a declining tendency, whereas
paper
and food
had an upward trend. Further
, it also
had a trend that remained stable, which was green waste
and glass
.
Looking at the chart in detail, in 1960, paper
and textiles made up the two biggest pieces of garbage
, contributing between 25% and 17%, respectively. Afterward
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Afterwards
food
and other trash accounted for the same percentage, 12%. Moreover
, five other waste
disposals (wood, plastic, glass
, metal, and green waste
) had donated under a tenth of 34% combined.
Furthermore
, garbage
disposal has changed after five decades, with food
accounting for just above a fifth of all trash. Next came after
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paper
and plastic, held by under 20%. Then
, textiles provided 2% more than metal and green waste
, which supplied 9%. In addition
, one of the types of doubled garbage
was wood (8%); and lastly
, glass
and other waste
had a minor number, 5% and 4%, respectively.Submitted by zzahrinaamalia on
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