The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015.
This
chart illustrates the ratio of family
having four kinds of electronics from 1995 to 2015.
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families
Overall
, the data reveals most electronics were over 80% in 2015, except for MP3 Player
. Both Mobile Fix the agreement mistake
players
phone
and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
Tablet
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tablets
had
dramatically increased Unnecessary verb
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in
a certain time point.
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phone
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phones
Computer
were lower than 10% in the first year, Fix the agreement mistake
computers
however
, the former became 80% after two decades, and the latter reached the same ratio after 2010. Similarly
, Tablet had no market share before 2000, it had the same percentage as the previous two in 2015. In contrast
, MP3 player was about 15% in 1995, the number ended up at 40% which was almost half of theratio
of Mobile and Computer.
Mobile surged dramatically between 1995 and 2000, it had a gap Correct your spelling
the ratio
more
than 60% from 9 to 70%, Change preposition
of more
this
made it the first electronic which had 70% at that moment. Similarly
, Tablet
had a similar situation in the period Fix the agreement mistake
Tablets
of
2005 and 2010, it started at below 20% and jumped to nearly 65%, Change preposition
between
it
was the third highest at the moment.Correct pronoun usage
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