Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
Many ex-convicts tend to turn to
crime
again after being released from prison
. I believe that the main causes of this
are long sentences and a lack of re-education. The possible solutions might be changing some rules and creating training programmes.
A lengthy punishment
has a disadvantage in that criminals find it hard to adapt to society
after being released. They are conditioned by prison
life through time and not accepted by society
often. Thus
, they contemplate crime
to return back to prison
again. For instance
, a person who has been in prison
since 1970 probably could have many obstructions due to
unaccustomed changes and would always want to be in prison
. Another reason is that culprits receive only punishment
rather than rehabilitation and training programmes. While
taking criminal behaviour is a mindset into account, they commit a crime
as they are not trained and re-educated before re-entering society
.
Having legislation about a lengthy punishment
is a solution to curb further
crimes. As people hardly adapt to the world and come across social exclusion after being in prison
for more than 30 years, it would be important to have amnesty for those people if they were to learn the rules of society
and their responsibilities. For example
, in Turkey, there is a law that permanent punishment
can be reduced if convicts behave positively. Moreover
, training programmes, rehabilitation centres and counselling are possible solutions to alleviate re-offending. The authorities of prisons should designate experts for counselling to teach them to re-socialise.
In conclusion, it is a fact that many criminals turn to crime
after their impurity is verified. Harsher punishment
in terms of year and a lack of counselling are the most prominent causes of this
issue; however
, having more training, education centres and the arrangements of punishment
over laws can bring hope.Submitted by yusifakhmad on
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