Some think that it is better to live in city while others prefer countryside life. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion?
It is a debatable issue whether the city is the best or rural area for
people
lives. some claim that Change noun form
people's
urban
Correct article usage
an urban
place
is best because it has all the amenities whereas
others prefer to village because this
venue has all the natural resources and unpolluted air. This
essay shall discuss both viewpoints, and I will give my opinion in the conclusion part.
On the one hand, cities
have all the facilities, not only the basic but also
the advanced namely modernised laboratory
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laboratories
university
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universities
school
, and multinational companies. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
For example
, people's standard of living can be improved when they live in metropolitan places. They are able to get plenty of employment opportunities in order to earn a higher salary, and as a result
, their family will not face any financial problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Similarly
, children's future will be developed by a quality of education. Therefore
, many prefer city lives
.
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life
On the other hand
, the village is not polluted as much as the cities
. Folks can breathe new fresh air, which is unpolluted. For instance
, people who are living in the countryside, they
do not Correct pronoun usage
apply
affect
deadly diseases Verb problem
have
such
as lung cancer. Because rural
Correct article usage
the rural
pollution's
ratio is lower than Change noun form
pollution
cities
, and as a result
, they can lead to get
a healthy lifestyle. Verb problem
apply
Likewise
, these
public who live in Correct determiner usage
the
countryside
Correct article usage
the countryside
consumes
all the natural resources tremendously as compared to the urban. Correct subject-verb agreement
consume
Hence
, some prefer to live in these venues.
To conclude
, cities
have all the facilities like education, hospitals, and college
, so many feel it is the best Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
place
whereas
others say the village is good due to
the unpolluted air and the natural resources. However
, in my opinion, aboutCorrect pronoun usage
apply
this
, the urban place
is the best place
to
folks live because Change preposition
for to
of
all the necessary facilities are Change preposition
apply
in
under Change preposition
apply
the
one roof.Correct article usage
apply
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Ensure that the introduction clearly outlines the structure of the discussion and the writer's opinion should be explicitly stated if the task requires it.
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