The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The maps depict an
island
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before and after some renovation works for
tourists
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and compare the changes on the
island
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for the construction.
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, many new
facilities
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have been constructed for
tourists
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, including accommodations, restaurants, swimming
facilities
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, etc. and those have been built without affecting the natural resources that much.

 Before the
facilities
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were constructed, there were only trees and
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beach
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a beach
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on the
island
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and most of the places were empty. On
this
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island
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, many new tourist
facilities
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have been made including accommodation
facilities
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, a restaurant, a reception
center
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centre
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, a pier for boating, a swimming facility on the
beach
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, and so on. Interestingly plants and trees were not cut down to build these constructions and most of the constructions were made near the
beach
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.
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, footpaths and roads for commuting have been built to facilitate the
tourists
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. The footpaths were made to walk between the residing places and the
beach
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while
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the motor tracks were created to visit the restaurant, reception area, and pier for boating. In summary, the construction was mainly made to facilitate the
tourists
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' stay, visit and amusement and for that, no plants or trees were cut.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, tourists, facilities, beach with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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