The graph below shows the number o f tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number o f tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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of individuals visiting a specific Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017. The data includes where
visitors
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stay: on the
island
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, on the
cruise
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ships;
furthermore
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, the total of the
visitors
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is
also
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reported.
Overall
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, the count of people staying on the
cruise
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surpasses that of the individuals staying on the
cruise
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at the outset, but it is reversed
at the end
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. The total tourist and
number
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of individuals staying on the
cruise
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gradually increase every
year
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. In the first reported
year
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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was at approximately 0.75
million
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.
This
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number
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increased and stabilized at 1.5
million
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for three years: 2013, 2014, and 2015.
Although
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, it dropped slightly in 2016, it came back to the same level in 2017. The quantity of
visitors
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staying on the
cruise
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ship was at 0.25
million
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. Even though , there was a little fluctuation between 2010 and 2012, it continuously increased with no drops until the
last
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reported
year
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, which accounted for 2
million
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. The total
visitors
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of a Caribbean
island
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was at 1
million
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in the first
year
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,
this
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number
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kept rising up along the way until it reached the peak at 3.5
million
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in the
last
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year
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, cruise, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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