The graph below shows the number o f tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number o f tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of individuals visiting a specific Caribbean
island
between 2010 and 2017. The data includes where
visitors
stay: on the
island
, on the
cruise
ships;
furthermore
, the total of the
visitors
is
also
reported.
Overall
, the count of people staying on the
cruise
surpasses that of the individuals staying on the
cruise
at the outset, but it is reversed
at the end
. The total tourist and
number
of individuals staying on the
cruise
gradually increase every
year
. In the first reported
year
, the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
was at approximately 0.75
million
.
This
number
increased and stabilized at 1.5
million
for three years: 2013, 2014, and 2015.
Although
, it dropped slightly in 2016, it came back to the same level in 2017. The quantity of
visitors
staying on the
cruise
ship was at 0.25
million
. Even though , there was a little fluctuation between 2010 and 2012, it continuously increased with no drops until the
last
reported
year
, which accounted for 2
million
. The total
visitors
of a Caribbean
island
was at 1
million
in the first
year
,
this
number
kept rising up along the way until it reached the peak at 3.5
million
in the
last
year
.
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