Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some of your holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos -explain why you didn't write earlier -invite them to come and stay with you at your place.

#month #holiday #friend #college #photos #-explain #-invite #place

Dear Betsy, I hope you are doing well during all

this

. time without seeing each other. I just

recived

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received

the wonderful photos that you sent, I am really feeling

feel

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thankfull

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thankful

for these days which we spent & together. it was

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unique holiday for me, I will never forget it, thank you for all these

memorys

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memories

. Recently I was

bussy

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busy

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with my family bec because my father was

was

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sek sick and all of us went through bad times but thanks

god

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ten now he getting better day after day,

that is

why I didn't find a chance to write

for

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you. I

wish if

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hope

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you can visit our town in the next holiday and spend the vacation with

usit

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will be

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a great

agreat

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a great

chance to repeat the wonderful memories together-

hope

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Hope

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to see you soon. with Love, warm regards

mustafa

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Mustafa

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

141 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Last month you had an overseas holiday with a friend from your college. They have just sent you some of your holiday photos together. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos -explain why you didn't write earlier -invite them to come and stay with you at your place.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbours in lrge cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

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