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The table shows the proportion of pupils attending for Secondary school types between 2000 and 2009

The table shows the proportion of pupils attending for Secondary school types between 2000 and 2009
#proportion #pupils #school
The table
compare
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compares
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 four different types of Secondary
schools
 in terms of
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
students
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student
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 attendance.
Overall
,
it is clear that
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
students
attended
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who attended
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in
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Community
Schools
 increased dramatically
while
 those of Specialist
schools
, Grammar
schools
 and
Voluntary- controlled
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voluntary-controlled
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schools
 saw
vary
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various
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level
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levels
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 of decreases over the 9-year period. It
also
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is also
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 worth noting that in 2000 Voluntary-controlled
schools
 were the most popular for pupils but by the end of
period
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,
Community
schools
 had taken the lead. In 2000, Voluntary- controlled
schools
 were the most popular choice among the
students
 with figures of 52%.
This
 was followed by the Grammar
schools
 which provided 24% of
total
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the total
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 amount of
students
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student
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 attendance.Specialist and
Community
schools
 were shown the same percentage at 12% by given the years. By the end of
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period
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period,
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students
of
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in
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Community
schools
 had seen a
dramatically
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 rise to 58%. Other
schools
 of proportion namely: Specialists
schools
, Voluntary-controlled and Grammar
schools
 had been declined in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, students, community with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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