The table shows the proportion of pupils attending for Secondary school types between 2000 and 2009
The table
compare
four different types of Secondary Change the verb form
compares
schools
in terms of proportion
of Correct article usage
the proportion
students
attendance.
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student
Overall
, it is clear that
proportion
of Correct article usage
the proportion
students
attended
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who attended
in
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apply
Community
Schools
increased dramatically while
those of Specialist schools
, Grammar schools
and Voluntary- controlled
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voluntary-controlled
schools
saw vary
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various
level
of decreases over the 9-year period. It Fix the agreement mistake
levels
also
worth noting that in 2000 Voluntary-controlled Add a missing verb
is also
schools
were the most popular for pupils but by the end of period
, Add an article
the period
Community
schools
had taken the lead.
In 2000, Voluntary- controlled schools
were the most popular choice among the students
with figures of 52%. This
was followed by the Grammar schools
which provided 24% of total
amount of Add an article
the total
students
attendance.Specialist and Fix the agreement mistake
student
Community
schools
were shown the same percentage at 12% by given the years.
By the end of Correct article usage
the period
period
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period,
students
of
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in
Community
schools
had seen a dramatically
rise to 58%. Other Change the word
dramatic
schools
of proportion namely: Specialists schools
, Voluntary-controlled and Grammar schools
had been declined in 2009.Submitted by myoqubova205 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, students, community with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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