The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph indicates the
amount
of guests to three different London Museums from 2007 to 2012.
Change the quantifier
number
Overall
, during 2007-2012, there was an upward trend in the number of National Gallery's visitors
, meanwhile, the figure of guest
in the others experienced a downward trend from 2007 to 2009- 2010 before undergoing an upward trend in the Fix the agreement mistake
guests
last
three years.
In 2007, Victoria and Albert was the most popular museum with nearly 14 million
people. The same figure in the next year
and then
, the sum of guest
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guests
started
decrease to about 6 Add the particle
started to
million
guests in 2010. Even so, the situation had
changed Unnecessary verb
apply
positely
when the number Correct your spelling
positively
politely
increase
gradually from about 6 Replace the word
increased
million
to 10 million
in 2012.
Similarly
, British Museum had approximately 12 thousand
visitors
in 2007 and dreased
by 6 Correct your spelling
decreased
dressed
thousand
in the next two years. In 2010, there was a steadily rose
in the number of its from 6 Replace the word
steady rise
thousand
to under 15 thousand
people.
By contrast
, National
Gallery saw Correct article usage
the National
a
stability Correct article usage
apply
year
over year
from above 5 million
visitors
to about 16 million
visitors
in 2012. Specifically, they was
the least popular museum with about 6 Change the verb form
were
million
people in the fisrt
Correct your spelling
first
year
and kept going up to about 11 million
in 2010. Then
, they remain
stable with the same figure in 2011 and peaked Wrong verb form
remained
in
16 Change preposition
at
million
in 2012.Submitted by giakhanh1223 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, million, year, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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