"You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year." Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter with reference to the advertisement published in The Guardian that you are looking for a teacher to teach the Malayalam language to your kids.
I have a couple of years of home teaching specifically in Malayalam and also
I have the capability to explain things in the form of a story , which kids normally likes
. Correct subject-verb agreement
like
Moreover
, I have an authorized trainer certificate from the Government of Kerala. Apart from
this
, I am good at English as well , hence
I can also
translate from English to Malayalam.
I also
like cooking and thus
in my free time, I can help you with cooking . I am an expert in cooking South Indian cuisines
and Chinese. I hope Fix the agreement mistake
cuisine
this
will be helpful for you.
I want this
job because I wish to pursue my higher education in Australia. If I get this
job, I can do some part-time courses along with
IELTS preparation. This
job not only gives me an opportunity for higher education but also
gives me sustainability to pursue my education.
Hence
, I request you to consider me for this
position.
I look forward to hearing a positive reply from you
yours faithfully,
ReshmaSubmitted by unnikrishnanpp153 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a clear separate point related to the task requirements. Avoid blending different ideas within the same paragraph.
task achievement
For task achievement, expanding on the reasons why you're suitable for the job by giving concrete examples or experiences would strengthen the response.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.