The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries. Write at least 150 words

The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice 

consumed per person per

year in different countries.

Write at least 150 words
This
table depicts
people
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people's
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consumption
of bear and
fruit
juice
each year in various
countries
around the world in
litres
.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that the majority of
countries
that
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shown on the table consume
beer
more than
fruit
juice
. Turning to the details,
beer
has the highest
consumption
from
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in
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Ireland at 155
litres
per person per year.
Whereas
, Finland has the lowest amount of
beer
among the other
countries
at 79
litres
and
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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is the next in order at 80
litres
.
On the other hand
, Canada has the largest number of
fruit
juice
consumption
at 52.6
litres
.
Although
New Zealand has the lowest amount of
drinking
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fresh
fruit
juice
at 24.8
litres
,
UK
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the UK
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and
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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are nearly close at 29.3 and 28.1
litres
.
To sum up
, we could say that
beer
consumption
is higher compared to
fruit
juice
in all different
countries
.
Which the
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highest figure
on
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for
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consuming
beer
is 155
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fruit, juice, countries, litres, beer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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