The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries. Write at least 150 words
This
table depicts people
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people's
consumption
of bear and fruit
juice
each year in
various countries
around the world in litres
. Overall
, it is clear from the table that the majority of countries
that
shown on the table consume Correct pronoun usage
apply
beer
more than fruit
juice
.
Turning to the details, beer
has the highest consumption
from
Ireland at 155
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in
litres
per person per year. Whereas
, Finland has the lowest amount of beer
among the other countries
at 79 litres
and Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
is the next in order at 80 Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
litres
.
On the other hand
, Canada has the largest number of fruit
juice
consumption
at 52.6 litres
. Although
New Zealand has the lowest amount of drinking
fresh Verb problem
apply
fruit
juice
at 24.8 litres
, UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
Correct article usage
the Netherland
Netherland
are nearly close at 29.3 and 28.1 Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
litres
.
To sum up
, we could say that beer
consumption
is higher compared to fruit
juice
in all different countries
. Which the
highest figure Correct pronoun usage
The
on
consuming Change preposition
for
beer
is 155Submitted by Eissa Aljabri
on
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