The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the number of tourists to Ashdown Museum from the
year
before refurbishment
to the year
after its renovation. The table also
depicts the results of surveys asking guests
about their satisfaction with their visit during the same period.
Overall
, while
the percentage of dissatisfied guests
was highest the year
before refurbishment
, the year
after the rebuild saw the largest proportion
of satisfied guests
. The number of no-response
instances was the lowest.
In the year
preceding the refurbishment
, the proportion
of dissatisfied guests
was the highest at 40%, with satisfied guests
standing at 30%. The figure for very dissatisfied guests
was lower at 10%. Meanwhile, the fraction of no-response
guests
was 5%, in comparison with 15% for very satisfied guests
. The no-response
category accounted for 5%.
In the year
following the renovation, there was a significant increase in the proportion
of guests
who were very satisfied and satisfied, rising from 15% and 30% to 35% and 40%, respectively. Meanwhile, the proportion
of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied guests
underwent a noticeable decrease from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5%, respectively. The no-response
category remained the same.
These changes indicate a positive impact on guest satisfaction after the refurbishment
of Ashdown
Museum.Correct article usage
the Ashdown
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