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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the number of tourists to Ashdown Museum from the
year
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 before
refurbishment
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 to the
year
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 after its renovation. The table
also
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 depicts the results of surveys asking
guests
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 about their satisfaction with their visit during the same period.
Overall
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,
while
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 the percentage of dissatisfied
guests
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 was highest the
year
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 before
refurbishment
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, the
year
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 after the rebuild saw the largest
proportion
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 of satisfied
guests
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. The number of
no-response
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 instances was the lowest. In the
year
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 preceding the
refurbishment
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, the
proportion
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 of dissatisfied
guests
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 was the highest at 40%, with satisfied
guests
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 standing at 30%. The figure for very dissatisfied
guests
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 was lower at 10%. Meanwhile, the fraction of
no-response
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guests
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 was 5%, in comparison with 15% for very satisfied
guests
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. The
no-response
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 category accounted for 5%. In the
year
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 following the renovation, there was a significant increase in the
proportion
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 of
guests
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 who were very satisfied and satisfied, rising from 15% and 30% to 35% and 40%, respectively. Meanwhile, the
proportion
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 of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied
guests
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 underwent a noticeable decrease from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5%, respectively. The
no-response
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 category remained the same. These changes indicate a positive impact on guest satisfaction after the
refurbishment
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 of
Ashdown
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the Ashdown
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 Museum.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, refurbishment, guests, proportion, no-response with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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