The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of tourists to Ashdown Museum from the
year
before
refurbishment
to the
year
after its renovation. The table
also
depicts the results of surveys asking
guests
about their satisfaction with their visit during the same period.
Overall
,
while
the percentage of dissatisfied
guests
was highest the
year
before
refurbishment
, the
year
after the rebuild saw the largest
proportion
of satisfied
guests
. The number of
no-response
instances was the lowest. In the
year
preceding the
refurbishment
, the
proportion
of dissatisfied
guests
was the highest at 40%, with satisfied
guests
standing at 30%. The figure for very dissatisfied
guests
was lower at 10%. Meanwhile, the fraction of
no-response
guests
was 5%, in comparison with 15% for very satisfied
guests
. The
no-response
category accounted for 5%. In the
year
following the renovation, there was a significant increase in the
proportion
of
guests
who were very satisfied and satisfied, rising from 15% and 30% to 35% and 40%, respectively. Meanwhile, the
proportion
of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied
guests
underwent a noticeable decrease from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5%, respectively. The
no-response
category remained the same. These changes indicate a positive impact on guest satisfaction after the
refurbishment
of
Ashdown
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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