The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the number of tourist to

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ashdown

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museum from the

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their visit during the same period

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the percentage of

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dissatisfied from

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before refurbishment was

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, the proportion of dissatisfied

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was the highest at 40%

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the satisfied

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stood at 30%

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the figure for very dissatisfied was lower at 10%.

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was 5% in comparison with 15% for very satisfied,the

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witnessed significant growth in the fraction of

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who

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satisfied and satisfied from 15% and 30% to 35% to 40% respectively.

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the

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of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied underwent a noticeable climb from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5% respectively, the

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accounted the same