Your sibling has sent you a letter asking for an update on your life. Write a letter to your sibling. In your letter: - Describe what you did for your last birthday - Ask for photos of your sibling’s last holiday - Talk about something you are looking forward to
Dear Amar,
I am really excited to hear from you. Hope you are doing well. I am doing extremely great in life.I am well settled in
job
now. I Correct pronoun usage
my job
have been
promoted Wrong verb form
was
as
manager Change preposition
to
couple
of months ago. Thanks for sending me the Correct article usage
a couple
birthday
card.
Firstly
, I would like to share about my birthday
, It was a
exciting day, filled with fun and surprises. it started with the Change the article
an
Birthday
Eve. My kids and wife arranged a birthday
surprise with a wonderful gift and cake. On the birthday
afternoon we all been
to Verb problem
went
restaurant
for lunch. Add an article
the restaurant
a restaurant
Restaurant
staff Correct article usage
The restaurant
has
gifted a voucher on the occasion of my Verb problem
gave
birthday
. Later on in the evening
we had a party with friends and Add a comma
evening,
neighbour
. It lasted till late Fix the agreement mistake
neighbours
night
. it finished Change preposition
at night
of
with dance and lots of fun. But on each occasion, I missed you a lot. I still remember how we used to celebrate our birthdays together.
Replace the word
off
Moreover
, I remember your birthday
also
comes in the last
week of the same month. I heard that you have been on holiday
on you
Change the pronoun
your
birthday
. please share me the details of your holiday
. which destination you have been, how
Change preposition
to, how
was
Change the verb form
were
you
experience, Correct pronoun usage
your
most
important the cost of the tripCorrect word choice
and most
.
Please remember to share your Change the punctuation
?
holiday
video and photos.It
been a year Add the auxiliary verb
It has
we
all Correct word choice
since we
meet
.
So, Wrong verb form
met
Lets
plan for a Replace the word
Let's
let us
holiday
in the coming summer with our families. where we can give our self
enough time.
Hope to hear from you soon
Best Regards
AnandCorrect your spelling
ourselves
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph addresses a single distinct idea corresponding to the prompt to maintain clarity.
coherence cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices and transition phrases to improve the flow of ideas between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
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task achievement
Maintain a conversational and engaging tone throughout the letter to reflect the interpersonal nature of writing to a sibling.
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