Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
One of the social concerns today relates to quality
education
and student
's attitude
. While
it is widely believed that a good teacher
is more important for education
success
, others
believe the student
's attitude
is more important to success
in education
. I'm going to discuss these opposing points of view. In my opinion, the student
's attitude
is most importantest
because Change the word
most important
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apply
people
weak
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with weak
knowledge
then
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don't
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an attitude
then
they very
difficult to teach.
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teacher
is more important for education
success
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students
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the student
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On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by others
that the student
's attitude
is more important to success
in education
. People
often have this
opinion because a student
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know
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receptive
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is receptive
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then
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example
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teachers
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teach
knowledges
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attitude
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people
don't
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attitude
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group
groups
teacher
is more important for education
success
others
believe the student
’s attitude
is more important to succeed in education
. Personally, I tend to believe that the student
's attitude
is most importantest
because Change the word
most important
a
Correct article usage
apply
people
weak
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with weak
knowledge
then
they can improve but a people
don't
have attitude
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an attitude
then
they very
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