Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

In modern decades, numerous types of distinct wild

animals

are facing elimination completely,

whereas

their counterparts and other species are on the verge

dying

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out. There are two major issues that lead to

this

trend which are destruction of their natural

habitats

and illegal poaching. To put an end to

this

situation, government intervention and enhancing the residents' consciousness are the possible solutions. First and foremost, it is undisputed that wild

animals

play a crucial role in biodiversity and balanced ecosystems.

Hence

, the negative modification in their

habitats

can seriously affect their survival.

However

, wild

habitats

are severely devastated and the main reason is

humankind

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activities. As a case in point, some individual groups influenced the wild environment

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burning forests, cutting down trees to expand

agriculture

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land and

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modern buildings. That apparently gives rise to their

habitats

being deprived

as well as

their accommodation being narrowed.

Thus

, the awareness advancement of inhabitants about the core value of wild

animals

is incredibly significant.

Secondly

,

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wild

animals

can be considered as

a

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lucrative prey for some individuals who are self-interested. From these animal species, they can achieve horns, nails or feathers which can be utilized to manufacture high-value products and bring about huge fortunes for not only merchants

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but

also

illegal hunters. To illustrate

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point, in the beauty

industry

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there are several branches that

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crocodile leather

to

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a key ingredient for purses or shoes which severely

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the

quantity

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of crocodile species. To resolve

this

problem, the government and

authority

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should set up rigorous regulations and punishments

involved

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to preserve wildlife and prevent deforestation without permission.

To sum up

, my own view on

this

matter is that regardless of poachers or degraded forests, we can reverse

this

situation by strict regulation from

authority

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authorities

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and educating residents about wild

animals

.