The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. * vehicles that use both fuel and electricity

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The chart shows how many hybrid vehicles were sold in

Japan

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, the US and the rest of the world from 2006 to 2009. During

this

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time, total

sales

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more than doubled from 360,000 to 740,000.

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, the trends in the US and

Japan

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were very different.

According to

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the data,

sales

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were high in the US, but the pattern fluctuated.

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they rose by 100,000 from 2006 to 2007, they peaked in 2007 at 350,000. After that, there was a steady fall to 280,000 in 2009.

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sales

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Japan

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were much lower at the start. They rose gradually to 90,000 in 2008, but

then

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they jumped to 330,000 in 2009.

Sales

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in the rest of the world increased steadily from 50,000 to 120,000 during the four-year period.

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, the data show that more hybrid vehicles were bought in the US than in any other country.

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, in 2009,

Japan

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overtook the US and became the country where most vehicles were sold.

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