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Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that the rising number of
cars
 is the primary source of
pollution
 and garbage
whereas
other
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others
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atributed
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attribute
to
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it to
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 the industries.
This
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would
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 on only elaborate the both aspects but
also
highlights
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 my
ownviewpoint
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own viewpoint
for
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 the second idea.
To begin
 with, the high demand
of
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cars
 in
city
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the city
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 directly results in air
pollution
. Consumption of fuel in car release harmful gases
such
 as sulphur dioxides Ampania, Mito oxide and corben manoride which directly mix with the
water
 in our atmosphere
then
 causes
diferent
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different
 phenomenon
such
 as acid rain, Change in weather and
fequent
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frequent
 rain.
Moreover
, when there is
high
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a high
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 number of
cars
, the road remains the same
that
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 causes a huge
trafficjam
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traffic jam
traffic-jam
 with more noise
pollution
.
For instance
.
According to
 a report by
Indian
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the Indian
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 government 20% of noise
pollution
 in India is
resulted
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cars
.
on the other hand
, industrial
pollution
 is very hazardous and
rempant
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rampant
remnant
. Different types of wastes
generated
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are generated
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 in
Industy
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Industry
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which
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are
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non-decomposable
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non decomposable
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 and directly dumped in landfill that takes
hundred
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hundreds
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 of years to rot causing soil and
water
pollution
.
For example
,
In china
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in China
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, industries accounted for nearly 31% of
water
pollution
.
Furthermore
, sea creatures are
in
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 the verge of extinction because of the harmful gases and other
materiall
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material
materials
 filled in
water
such
 as toxins and plastics from
water
 contamination by industry.
Hence
, it is
also
 the main reason for typhoid and Cholera seen in
human
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humans
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, which causes millions of
death
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deaths
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 annually. In conclusion, raising awareness and strict rules and
regulation
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regulations
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 is a more sensible approach towards
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handling
handing
handding
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handling
pollution
Therefore
, Joint efforts of government and
citizen
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citizens
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keeps
kelps
skelps
ikelps
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help
 to fight
with
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this
 problem
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