The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of generating
electricity
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using a hydroelectric power station. In general, the process cycle is broadly distributed into
day
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and
night
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stages with the
day
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the
water
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flows
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downward.
On the other hand
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, the
night
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stage is when the
water
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flows
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back into the initial
reservoir
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. In the beginning stages of the
day
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, the
water
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from the river is stored in the high-level
reservoir
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. Next stage, the dam can be opened during the
day
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and the
water
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flows
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downward to move the turbine to generate
electricity
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. Next stage, the
electricity
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is stored in a generator.
Then
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, the power station distribution
electricity
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to the National grid using Power lines. After that, the
water
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to stored in the low-level
reservoir
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. In terms of the
night
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stages, the
water
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flows
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in another direction by the turbine at
night
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.
Moreover
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, the
water
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is pumped back to a high-level
reservoir
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which is closed during the
night
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. The river
water
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is stored at the upper level and later it
flows
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down, starting the cycle again.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, day, night, water, flows, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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