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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
#show #magazines #person #five #countries #sales
The provided chart presents the
amount
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number
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 of magazines sold per head
in particular
 countries between 2023 to 2005 and
estimated
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the estimated
show examples
 2007
sales
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of magazine individual
sales
 is in
country
 B
whereas
Country
 E
have
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has
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 the smallest contribution during surveyed years.
Alought
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Although
Country
 A,B and C show the same downward trend,
Country
 D
have
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has
show examples
a
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an
show examples
 upwards trend and
Country
 E experienced
flucatution
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fluctuation
fluctuations
 during the years.
To begin
 with, the largest distribution of personal
sales
 in the
begining
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beginning
 was
country
 B with
50dollars
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50 dollars
, followed by
country
 A and C with
near
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nearly
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 50
dollars
 and approximately
48dollars
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48 dollars
 respectively.
In addition
with
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apply
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,
these
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this country
these countries
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country
 showed continuous
dropped
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drops
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 and predicted
decreased
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decreases
show examples
 by
5-10dollars
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5-10 dollars
 in 2007. Despite
these three
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this three country
these three countries
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country
had
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having
show examples
 a downward tendency,
it
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they
show examples
 still shared the largest shares of the market. On the other
hands
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hand
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, personal magazine
sales
 of
Country
 D started at under
20dollars
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20 dollars
 and reached 20
dollars
 in 2005
along with
 a projection to
22dollars
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22 dollars
 in 2007. In comparison,
Country
 E showed
flucatution
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fluctuation
fluctuations
 during the period from
5dollars
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5 dollars
 to
7dollars
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7 dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, country, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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