The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
The chart shows the information about average weekly spending of
income
by families in 1968 and in 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that, most families spent their
income
on food in 1968
while
spent on
leisure
activities in 2018. Despite
this
, household goods stayed stable for two years. Based on the graph, there is a remarkable contrast in spending patterns between food and
leisure
over 50 years. An interesting example of changing spending patterns can be seen in the realm of food expenditure. In 1968,
this
category accounted for a significant 35% of weekly
income
.
However
, for five decades, there has been a remarkable transformation as
this
figure rapidly declined by half, reaching just 17.5% in 2018.
In contrast
, in 2018,
leisure
activities increased to over 20%
while
in 1968, it accounted for less than 10% of their weekly
income
.
Therefore
, the graph indicates that people are now willing to allocate more of their
income
towards
leisure
activities. Interestingly, the expenditure on fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and personal goods in 1968 was slightly higher compared to 2018. To be more specific, individuals allocated only 6% and 4% of their
income
towards fuel and power respectively. It is
also
interesting that the shares of household goods remained unchanged for 50 years, both of which stood at 8%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Budget allocation
  • Consumer spending
  • Expenditure trends
  • Historical comparison
  • Economic context
  • Inflation adjustments
  • Financial priorities
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spendings
  • Essential necessities
  • Luxury items
  • Technological advancement
  • Income distribution
  • Fiscal habits
  • Societal norms
  • Budgeting differences
  • Monetary trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Spending categories
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