The charts below give information on the agesof the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the agesof the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the agesof the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the
age
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of
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population
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the population
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in Italy and Yemen . It
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compare
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and
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the percentage of different
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groups in Yemen and Italy both
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population
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in 2000 and
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the expected
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population
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in 2050.
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, In Yemen, most of the
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is below the
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of 14 which is projected to decrease. Meanwhile, In Italy,
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of the
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is present between the
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of 15-59 which is expected to show a negative trend.
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with, 50% of
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Yemen’s residents were under the
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of 14 years old which was predicted to decrease to 37%.
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, Individuals between 15-59 years take up 46.3% which was estimated to go up to 67.3%
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, Italy’s inhabitants between the
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of 15-59 accounted for 61.6% of the
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which was predicted to reduce up to 46.2%. Residents above the
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of 60
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projected to expand
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42.3% by the year 2050

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • demographics
  • populations
  • projections
  • trends
  • percentages
  • age groups
  • youthful
  • aging population
  • median age
  • shifts
  • dramatic changes
  • elderly
  • working-age population
  • dependency ratio
  • fertility rate
  • life expectancy
  • baby boomers
  • demographic transition
  • geriatric
  • adolescents
  • juveniles
  • seniors
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