More and more fathers are taking break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Being a family, it is extremely crucial for the kids to have a

role

model to copy and learn from. If both parents work,

this

would not satisfy these

need

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. If,

however

, the father

stay

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at

home

to take care of the child, it does solve the problem of lacking of

role

model that the

children

suffers

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, but I believe there is a better

aproach

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approach

. The notion of

father

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the father

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being the one who stays at

home

and do the lookout for the

children

while

their

wive

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wives

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works

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does help the kid to have a

role

model that they can learn from.

However

, I believe that the

wive

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wife

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is better at taking care

the

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kids than their husband.

Reasons

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being

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is

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that

woman

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women

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are known to be more caring and have been proved by

evolution

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the evolution

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of humanity to be

a

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apply

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better

person

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to stay

and

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educate their young ones. In

the

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ancient times,

women

are

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usually the ones who

stays

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stayed

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at

home

,

cooks

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cooked

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,

tidies

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up their

home

, and

raise

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raised

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their

children

while

the men

hunts

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or

farms

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. In the modern days, the

role

doesn't change as much.

Women

have been

proved

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proven

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to be better at raising their

child

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children

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also

because of their emotional

tendency

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tendencies

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. Men are known to be more rational and blunt compared to

women's

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women

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emotional and sensitive being. With

these emotion-based approach

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this emotion-based approach

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, the

children

would figure out what things are good and bad for them as the

women

would most likely give them

reaction

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reactions

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based on their actions.

Overall

, I don't go against the idea of the father being the one in charge of taking care of his

children

, but I believe there is a better approach to the matter.