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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Every year an average of 2 billion tons of waste is produced, out of which a certain percentage is recyclable
such
 as bottles and newspapers. Recycling
such
 materials can have a greater impact on our environment,
however
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 some countries yet have not implemented it.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons
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 the problem and how it can be alleviated. The primary cause lies in the lack of awareness and convenience within the masses. In some countries either the recycling programs do not exist or they are relatively new to
this
 system.
People
 being unaware regrading the disposal systems and recycling simply dump their piled garbage in the same bin. Even those who have adequate knowledge about recycling, unwillingly throw their waste
due to
 inconvenience in sorting their waste,
furthermore
 setting up a dustbin outside their homes merely for some bottles and newspapers adds up to the cause. To encourage
people
 to recycle often, a comprehensive awareness campaign should be conducted to raise the benefits of recycling and using a smart disposal method.
Moreover
, we can promote the use of alternative products that are easy to
dispose
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 and recyclable which indirectly adds up to the economic and welfare development of one’s nation.
This
 can be implemented via newspapers, advertisements and flyers delivered. Another simple way is setting up a recycling dustbin beside a general bin on streets and at homes.
For instance
, in
India
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 two different coloured bins are set up to segregate
wastes
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 easily.
To conclude
, the lack of awareness about recycling amongst
people
 and the reluctance to sort their refuse prevents them from performing the useful
practise
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. If
people
 are updated about the right knowledge and advantages of recycling, they may choose to do the right thing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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