The graph below shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above illustrates the five different activities the elderly did in their free time between 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, watching TV is the activity that is
the most enjoyed, however
Add a comma
however,
this
was over taken
by hiking in the Correct your spelling
overtaken
mid 2000's
. Add a hyphen
mid-2000's
On the other hand
, surfing the internet has always been the
least favorite Change the word
my
past time
.
Over the Correct your spelling
pastime
30
years watching TV has been enjoyed by the majority of the elderly population. Correct word choice
last 30
This
was the highest figure in the 1980's
at 60, with a slight increase to 70 in 2000 followed by a small decline to 65 in 2010. The theatre was the next most favored leisure practice in 1980 (50)Correct your spelling
1980s
,
but experienced a small decrease to 30 in 1990 before stopping at 45% in 2010.
Hiking had the most exponential rise, the figures being respectively 20 in 1980 and 80 in 2010. Remove the comma
apply
This
was the largest increase out of all the five hobbies. Reading had many fluctuations, in the 1980's
it started at 30, and Correct your spelling
1980s
then
had a small rise to 40, before a sharp drop to 20 and then
a large climb to 60. Surfing the internet has always been the lowest chosen hobby. The numbers grew from 0 to 15 in the 2000's
with a final statistic of 50%.Correct your spelling
2000s
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