A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals

have been used by people for several years in the

field

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fields

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of agriculture, cosmetics, and dairy

farm

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and have an inter-dependent functionality in our society

and

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therefore

humans

can employ

animals

to fulfil their needs, whilst others argue the exploitation of

animals

to meet our increasing demands.

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essay agrees to not mistreat

animals

and

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of equal rights as

humans

.

Ever so growing

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population has led

human

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demands and supply increase which in turn puts pressure on various industries to meet the requisition.

This

results in companies using

animals

for testing purposes for their makeup products and over usage of these

animals

in dairy

farm

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, by tormenting and slaughtering them. There has not been a firm law on animal protection imposed on these brands equivalent to

humans

if treated the same.

For instance

, many mainstream brands

such

as Maybelline, MAC and Bobbi Brown are not cruelty-free.

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, some netizens debate animal importance in everyday life for food and research. For a long time,

animals

have been serving as a domestic help for farmers in fields to plough crops and produce milk. These products are consumed daily and

forms

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an important aspect of our nutrition providing calcium and vitamins to young kids. In

turn

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humans

take care of these

animals

proving

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them with shelter and food. India is a primary example wherein cows and buffaloes are treated holy and prayed

during

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festivals

for providing

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us with food and income. In my opinion,

animals

have served a great help to human

for

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their necessities, mistreating and exploitation are prevalent causes of declination of their population and habitat which has a bigger impact on our society and nature.