IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#information #consumer #items #five #countries #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table indicates the amount of expenditure spent on three vital items in life in five various
countries
Use synonyms
 around the world in 2002.
Overal
Correct your spelling
Overall
show examples
,
it is clear that
Linking Words
 Turkish consumers assigned the most amount of their budgets to two main categories, food and
bevarage
Correct your spelling
beverage
 and
also
Linking Words
 leisure and education, compared to the other
countries
Use synonyms
. The presented information shows that nearly
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
16
Use synonyms
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
 of Swedish expenses
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
were associated with
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
edible products and
tobacoo
Correct your spelling
tobacco
, the lowest number among the other
countries
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
, it is worth mentioning that they consumed less money, lower than six
percentage
Replace the word
per cent
show examples
 of all
pays
Correct subject-verb agreement
pay
show examples
, on clothing and footwear in comparison to other citizens across the world in 2002.
While
Linking Words
 in Italy people spent
cost
Verb problem
apply
show examples
a substantial amount of money about 10
percent
Use synonyms
 on clothing.
This
Linking Words
 noticeable number placed Italy on the first rank between considered
countries
Use synonyms
 in
this
Linking Words
 specific item. It can be deduced that in Spain people hardly spent about two
Use synonyms
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
 on leisure and educational items.
Conversely
Linking Words
, the Turkish allocated approximately five
Use synonyms
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
show examples
 of their costs to
this
Linking Words
 major category.
Submitted by mahtabaminzadeh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, percent with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: