The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

the table gives information about the forested

land

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changing (in millions of hectares) in five different world's part in three years, 1990;2000;and 2005. At a glance, it is noticeable that Europe had the largest forest area in the given periods, whilst Oceania was the opposite.

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, Europe experienced a rise in regard to the

land

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, with the exception of the other parts. To embark on, Europe's forested

land

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in the initial year was 989

million

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ha,

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suddenly increased in the next 15 years to 1.001

million

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ha, which was the longest area.

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, Africa, Oceania, and South America witnessed a fall,

started

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from 749, 199, and 946

million

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ha to 691,197, and 882

million

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ha in the

last

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period, respectively. Subsequent to that, Asia and North America had different development in terms of

the

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land

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, which fluctuated and remained stable, consecutively. The former had 576

million

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ha in

first

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year, but

this

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number dropped slightly by 10

million

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and

finally

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climbed again to above the

first mentioned

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ha. The latter just stood in the range of 708 and 705

million

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ha.

e.warikar

Dec 15, 2023

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