The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
the table gives information about the forested
land
changing (in millions of hectares) in five different world's part in three years, 1990;2000;and 2005.
At a glance, it is noticeable that Europe had the largest forest area in the given periods, whilst Oceania was the opposite. In addition
, Europe experienced a rise in regard to the land
, with the exception of the other parts.
To embark on, Europe's forested land
in the initial year was 989 million
ha, then
suddenly increased in the next 15 years to 1.001 million
ha, which was the longest area. Moreover
, Africa, Oceania, and South America witnessed a fall, started
from 749, 199, and 946 Wrong verb form
starting
million
ha to 691,197, and 882 million
ha in the last
period, respectively. Subsequent to that, Asia and North America had different development in terms of the
Correct article usage
apply
land
, which fluctuated and remained stable, consecutively. The former had 576 million
ha in first
year, but Change the article
the first
this
number dropped slightly by 10 million
ha,
and Remove the comma
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finally
climbed again to above the first mentioned
ha. The latter just stood in the range of 708 and 705 Add a hyphen
first-mentioned
million
ha.Submitted by e.warikar on
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