The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
the table gives information about the forested
land
changing (in millions of hectares) in five different world's part in three years, 1990;2000;and 2005. At a glance, it is noticeable that Europe had the largest forest area in the given periods, whilst Oceania was the opposite.
In addition
, Europe experienced a rise in regard to the
land
, with the exception of the other parts. To embark on, Europe's forested
land
in the initial year was 989
million
ha,
then
suddenly increased in the next 15 years to 1.001
million
ha, which was the longest area.
Moreover
, Africa, Oceania, and South America witnessed a fall,
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from 749, 199, and 946
million
ha to 691,197, and 882
million
ha in the
last
period, respectively. Subsequent to that, Asia and North America had different development in terms of
the
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land
, which fluctuated and remained stable, consecutively. The former had 576
million
ha in
first
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year, but
this
number dropped slightly by 10
million
ha
,
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and
finally
climbed again to above the
first mentioned
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ha. The latter just stood in the range of 708 and 705
million
ha.
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