The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The bar
chart
displays the
causes
leading the adults to education by percentage,
while
the pie
chart
distributes the costs that should be shared
of
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the courses.
Overall
, we can clearly see from the bar
chart
that "interest in the subject" and "to gain qualification" are the major
causes
behind adult education, and "interest in the subject" is the highest one.
On the other hand
, from the pie
chart
, individuals bear the highest cost and employers take the second highest portion. At
first,
the bar
chart
represents seven
causes
and among them, 40% and 38% of adults go for courses of their interest in the subject and to gain some qualifications respectively.
Additionally
, only 12% and 9% of people take it to able to change jobs and meet new people respectively. There are other three
causes
which share nearly similar percentages on the
chart
.
Furthermore
, the pie
chart
clearly shows the highest value of 40% among the cost shares of individuals.
Conversely
, 25% goes to taxpayers which derives from the expectations of the people.
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