You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport

#transport #authorities #face

Dear

sir

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Sir

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/madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding the

transport

issues I have faced lately whenever I have used

London

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the London

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Public

transport

service

. Currently, I am a student studying

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Fanshaw

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Fanshawe

college

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College

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. The reason

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for

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using

bus

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the bus

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service

is that I

dont

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don't

have my own car. So, my daily means of

commute

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commuting

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London

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the London

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transport

bus

service

Its

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It's

It is

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been seven months I have been

traveling

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travelling

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to my college by

bus

. There are several issues I

had

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have

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faced

while

using your

bus

transport

which I would like you to know.

Firstly

, the timing that shows on your

bus

stand board and Mobile application does not match.

Secondly

, all buses are always running late by 15-25 minutes every day. On top of that, there

several

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are several

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locations in

london

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London

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where

roads

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road

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construction

are

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going on because of which

bus

stops have been changed to other location but are posted on the stop poles or in the mobile application.

However

, I have

few

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a few

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suggestion

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suggestions

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that I would like you to consider. To eliminate the

bus

waiting time please

increas

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increase

the number of buses on

most

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apply

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busiest routes in the city.

Also

, update the new

stops

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stop

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location on the

perticular

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particular

spot where construction is underway or generate a push

motification

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notification

mobile

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the mobile

a mobile

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app to make it

ease

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easy

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for

everbody

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everybody

. I hope

this

might be helpful for you to know

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how to

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improve the

bus

service

within

london

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London

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city. Thank you, Mehfuzkhan Pathan

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea, fully developed with further explanation, examples, or details. The letter should logically progress from one point to the next, making it easy for the reader to follow your thoughts.

coherence cohesion

Effective use of transition words and phrases can enhance the readability of your letter and better link your ideas together.

task achievement

Cover all aspects of the task ensuring to provide specific details about the problems faced and possible solutions.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter appropriate to the context of writing to an authority.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

236 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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