You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport
Dear
sir
/madam,
I am writing Capitalize word
Sir
this
letter regarding the transport
issues I have faced lately whenever I have used London
Public Correct article usage
the London
transport
service
.
Currently, I am a student studying in
Change preposition
at
Fanshaw
Correct your spelling
Fanshawe
college
. The reason Capitalize word
College
of
using Change preposition
for
bus
Correct article usage
the bus
service
is that I dont
have my own car. So, my daily means of Correct your spelling
don't
commute
is Wrong verb form
commuting
London
Correct article usage
the London
transport
bus
service
. Its
been seven months I have been Replace the word
It's
It is
traveling
to my college by Change the spelling
travelling
bus
.
There are several issues I had
faced Wrong verb form
have
while
using your bus
transport
which I would like you to know. Firstly
, the timing that shows on your bus
stand board and Mobile application does not match.
Secondly
, all buses are always running late by 15-25 minutes every day. On top of that, there several
locations in Add a missing verb
are several
london
where Change the capitalization
London
roads
construction Change the noun form
road
are
going on because of which Change the verb form
is
bus
stops have been changed to other location but are posted on the stop poles or in the mobile application.
However
, I have few
Correct article usage
a few
suggestion
that I would like you to consider. To eliminate the Change to a plural noun
suggestions
bus
waiting time please increas
the number of buses on Correct your spelling
increase
most
busiest routes in the city. Change the adjective
apply
Also
, update the new stops
location on the Change the noun form
stop
perticular
spot where construction is underway or generate a push Correct your spelling
particular
motification
in Correct your spelling
notification
mobile
app to make it Add an article
the mobile
a mobile
ease
for Correct your spelling
easy
everbody
. I hope Correct your spelling
everybody
this
might be helpful for you to know to
improve the Rephrase
how to
bus
service
within london
city.
Thank you,
Mehfuzkhan PathanChange the capitalization
London
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea, fully developed with further explanation, examples, or details. The letter should logically progress from one point to the next, making it easy for the reader to follow your thoughts.
coherence cohesion
Effective use of transition words and phrases can enhance the readability of your letter and better link your ideas together.
task achievement
Cover all aspects of the task ensuring to provide specific details about the problems faced and possible solutions.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter appropriate to the context of writing to an authority.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,